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Friday, January 18, 2019

Scondary Characters: They Can Make or Break a Novel

As writers, we spend a lot of time on our main characters, giving them biographies and attending to every detail of their lives, but how much time do we devote to the supporting cast of characters? They are the best buddies of our heroes or relatives, minor villians, the people who lend interest and credence to our stories.

When I construct scenes, I usually think of the main character and what she/he wants and how this will work in the scene, but when I start writing, well, that's when the secondary characters come into play. Boom!  You need somebody, be it a watchman, a farmer, or a stripper.  Who is this person? They need a personality, maybe not a life story, but we must know enough about them to find them believable.  And interesting. In some ways, they must advance the plot.

In Promiscuous Mode, my soon-to-be published mystery, I felt like I hit the secondary character jackpot.  The book is set in Northern Wisconsin.  The real Northwoods.  There's a shoe factory that not making shoes anymore, but ordering them from Asia.  There's computer shenanigans, business shenanigans, sexual shenigans. And people!  I came up with the lowlife Darrell who kidnaps the main character's cat. He's a ne'er do well with a wallet full of cash.  Claims he won it up the road at an Indian casino.  But did he? There's the Revenend Josie, an Episcopal priest who peppers her speech with French. She loves a good glass of wine and adventure.  Maybe she loves adventure too much.  And lastly, there's Phyllis King, a VP at the shoe factory.  She's the town tennis champ, golf champ, has a beautiful Victorian house and a dreadful secret. Oh, I do love secondary characters. They all have secrets.

In The Shadow Warriors, I have a Bulgarian spy, Georgi Balakov  of whom I've very fond.  And a landlady with a bunion who always wears carpet slippers. And a bad guy who turns into a good guy.  This happened because he was based on a real person whom I did not like.  Then we were assigned to a big project together and I got to know him.  He wasn't so bad, and the more we worked together the better I liked him, and his character changed from 100% bad to part-bad, part-good.  I felt better about writing him into the book after that.



Secondary characters are not such nice to have, they're mandatory.  Make them colorful, make them good, bad, evil or better yet, a mixture. Think hard about them.  They prop up the plot and should not be cardboard.  Never cardboard.  Make the reader perk up when they come on the scene. 

 Here are some talented writers who have original thoughts about secondary characters.  Do give them a read.

Skye Taylor http://www.skye-writer.com/blogging_by_the_sea
Margaret Fieland http://margaretfieland.wordpress.com
Helena Fairfax http://www.helenafairfax.com/blog
Dr. Bob Rich https://wp.me/p3Xihq-1tC
Fiona McGier http://www.fionamcgier.com/
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.blogspot.ca/
Connie Vines http://mizging.blogspot.com/
Rhobin L Courtright http://rhobinsrambles.blogspot.com/
Victoria Chatham. http://www.victoriachatham.com