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How Do I Develop Characters?
A great question. A tricky question.
How I develop a character is to steal what I know, research
what I don’t, and if anything is left (and there’s always something crucial one
can’t find out), make it up.
Sometimes characters arrive in my imagination well developed. Other times, if I am riffing off a
“real” character, like my mother, I struggle to differentiate the character
from the person, to create a true character and not a clone. A character can arrive with a few
characteristics: for example I know that she is a forty-year-old Mennonite
widow living in a tiny town in south central Kansas in 1953. And that’s all I know about her. I give
her a name. Lizzie Ledoux. Lizzie is my current WIP.
As a young
girl, I spent a summer in this town in the fifties living with my grandmother and
working in my uncle’s café. The
July heat, the café patrons, small town life, trips to the city of Newton,
trips to the big city of Wichita, even the denim swimsuit I bought came
streaming back into memory. But my
character would never wear a swimsuit, would she? She wouldn’t hang out at the café, either. She would go to church, dress modestly,
tend a garden, and visit family. But who was she?
I remembered a statement my grandmother once made. “Doc Brenneman and his family are back
from Africa.” Africa? What were they doing there? Ah, missionaries. Mennonite missionaries. Interesting. With that in my head, I was off to research Mennonite
missionaries in Africa. I found
out where the missions were, and that they ran clinics and schools. In this part of Africa, the official
language was French. So my
character spoke French. I
concocted her education, and part of her time in Africa, her backstory as we say in fiction. She learned to like spicy food and
brought home hot pepper seeds. The
children taught her to run distances, because transportation was rare. She is still a runner. She learned self-sufficiency and leadership. Female missionaries who went to Africa
were (or became) strong women. My
character liked art, and she brought back a few African masks. Slowly, in increments, I began to know Lizzie,
how she was widowed, how she coped, and her actions when she discovered a dead
body in her little town, right in the restaurant parking lot.
In one book, Chased By
Death (now with my agent), a character, Maxine, arrived with a full-blown
story. It was like she was at my
shoulder talking to me, as I transcribed her tale. And then? She said, “well, you can take it from
here,” and left my shoulder, with me shouting, “Hey, wait, you can’t just
leave! I don’t know what happens to you.”
She told me I would figure it out, and of course with much gnashing of
teeth and hard work, I did. Maxine was tough because she had to be.
We have to put our characters through the wringer. Because they aren’t real, are they? Listen:
after you have written a book and lived with your characters day by day, I
guarantee they are real to you.
Life is
strange. Writing is even
stranger.
Here are other bloggers who are tackling the subject. Take a gander at what they have to say.
Skye Taylor
http://www.skye-writer.com/ blogging_by_the_sea
Margaret Fieland http://margaretfieland. wordpress.com
A.J. Maguire http://ajmaguire.wordpress. com/
Victoria Chatham http://victoriachatham. blogspot.ca
Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/
Rachael Kosinski http://rachaelkosinski.weebly. com/
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Dr. Bob Rich http://wp.me/p3Xihq-YV
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman. blogspot.ca/
Anne Stenhouse http://annestenhousenovelist. wordpress.com/
Marie Laval http://marielaval.blogspot.co. uk/
Fiona McGier http://www.fionamcgier.com/
Rhobin Courtright http://www. rhobinleecourtright.com
Margaret Fieland http://margaretfieland.
A.J. Maguire http://ajmaguire.wordpress.
Victoria Chatham http://victoriachatham.
Marci Baun http://www.marcibaun.com/blog/
Rachael Kosinski http://rachaelkosinski.weebly.
Diane Bator http://dbator.blogspot.ca/
Dr. Bob Rich http://wp.me/p3Xihq-YV
Beverley Bateman http://beverleybateman.
Anne Stenhouse http://annestenhousenovelist.
Marie Laval http://marielaval.blogspot.co.
Fiona McGier http://www.fionamcgier.com/
Rhobin Courtright http://www.
We all work in such different ways but with so many similarities! And yes, I agree characters can have a strange balance in the mind of unreal but real.
ReplyDeleteMy characters frequently present themselves then leave me to figure it out. It's all very frustrating. That's where I'm currently at with a few WIPs.
ReplyDeleteJudith, I find it interesting that you get some of your characters from real people in your past (or present!). I am not aware of ever having done that, except when writing explicit or disguised autobiography.
ReplyDeleteYour post does make your writing interesting.
:)
Bob
Interesting subject and blog post. "Back from Africa," does give the reader an instant mental picture and a million unanswered questions.
ReplyDeleteHi Judith, Yes, I agree, living with these people day in and through many a long night - they're more real than some of the neighbours to me. Anne
ReplyDeleteMany of my characters kind of show up in my brain very clearly. Trenna, for example, is the star of the Sedition series and she smacked me upside the head one day when I picked up an old Templar sword. Her counterpart, Nelek, on the other hand ... He took some serious digging before I finally understood him.
ReplyDeleteJudith, wow! That sounds like a really interesting story! It's amazing that you have those memories to draw from.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fascinating character. I loved Lizzie. Please be sure to let us know when this book becomes available. I'd love tor read her story.
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